BRMntga's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sir Woody Pencilton III]

I really like it and I think I can't explain why. But I can say it's looking good, and it's clean, and creative. Well, I guess I was wrong.

MasonDeGraff responds:

Haha thank you! I think you explained it well with the word 'clean'. It's an extremely simple design, but the geometric shapes and clean lines I think are what make it appealing. The colors are a bit washed out too which helps it not stand out as much.

I really appreciate the feedback!

[Arty Outfit - "Earth Without Art"]

Very appeling design - I like how you didn't just put the sentence there.

And I have to say that the "natural fabric contains visible fibers" adds a lot of depth and meaning (I'm just playing, but it's funny). :)

Wolffmeister responds:

Thank you! Yeah my arty friends and I were joking about the "natural fabric contains visible fibers thing" XD. I love how it contributes a little bit to the "earthy" feel while also being relatively close to white.

[The Paint is Mightier Than the Sword (ARTY SHIRT ENTRY)]

It's really cool and epic! It's has some "Make Art Not War" vibes, I like it.
If you say that you still trying to pick up minor flaws, I would recommend making the brush-sword a bit thiner in the "blade" part. Other than that I think it's great - It isn't clean but I like it that way.

Just to point out, I believe that if you still making changes you should reupload it to newgrounds also so it can be seen here and also be the exactly same design as the png (Of course except the transparent background).

GOOD LUCK!

Scifi-Centaur responds:

Thank you for the feed back! It means a lot <3 I'll see if I can fiddle around with the lines and maybe clean it up a little more. It's kinda difficult because I don't have any line smoothing software (I am, unfortunately, a mac user for a few more weeks) but I'll see what I can do. Thank you so much for taking the time to look it over! And good luck to you too!

[Andy Warhol Inspired Art Supplies]

That's my favourite design of the three - It's interesting and colorful, and the details and shading are great.
Great work :)

pencilmidget responds:

gosh you're so nice, thanks!! <3

[How do I ctrl Z]

Not bad - I'll explain why I gave only 3.5 stars.
The idea is good - I feel like I would like to see an interesting illustration in addition to the text. I really like the handwritten font (I don't know if you did it yourself or used one but it fits well) but I think it should be organized more "eyecatchingly" (Is it a word?) and have some more depth - maybe adding a bit of shadow to the ctrl button, or making the letters bold and "stronger".
In conclusion - It's good, could have some more ambition - Make your creativity burst more and show off more, and have fun!

art-prince-evan responds:

This is really helpful! Thank you for the advice :) (Oh, and the font was done by me!)

["Draw with Jazza: established 2012" Crest]

"I’ve always wanted to design a shirt, but I never really knew where to start" - congrats, you officially nailed it.

pencilmidget responds:

thank you so much!! ;v; <3

[In my DNA]

"This is my first ever go at digital art" - Still good! Of course you can see some tiny problems in the lines and the overlapping but it's something you learn to avoid and play with only when you keep it up.

Now let's talk about the idea and concept: Awesome!

NatalieAnneWard responds:

Thank you. I may try and have another go to try and get a bit neater.....not sure I'll have enough time but I can always try! :-)

[COTM! Change the World!]

I feel like it's a bit too overwhelming... But actually I don't care it's awesome.

DanielleA responds:

Thank you!! I'm glad you think it's awesome!

[ART should be an Olympic sport!]

I like the idea! Also, I like the brush torch and the fact that the red circle looks like it's painted. The circles details are also great.
Yet I think that the brush looks a bit out of place, not in the idea but in the style - it just looks too clean when I compare it to the great "brushy" detail of the circles. If you want to keep the clean lineart I would recommend add some line weight to it to add interest and to break the constant look of the lines. Still like it! I wish you the best of luck - keep it up!

itain responds:

Wow, thank you so much for that comment!

[In an Artist feather]

The style is so cool! It instantly got my attention. But I think the design will look better on a shirt without the buttom part (The text part). Still great job!

Ponchokarate responds:

Thank you. I intentionally designed the text with the eagle for the back of the t-shirt on heigh of the shoulders. But somehow i liked it on the front too. Nethertheless i wasnt quite sure how to decide so im grateful for your feedback