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Very appeling design - I like how you didn't just put the sentence there.

And I have to say that the "natural fabric contains visible fibers" adds a lot of depth and meaning (I'm just playing, but it's funny). :)

Wolffmeister responds:

Thank you! Yeah my arty friends and I were joking about the "natural fabric contains visible fibers thing" XD. I love how it contributes a little bit to the "earthy" feel while also being relatively close to white.

It's really cool and epic! It's has some "Make Art Not War" vibes, I like it.
If you say that you still trying to pick up minor flaws, I would recommend making the brush-sword a bit thiner in the "blade" part. Other than that I think it's great - It isn't clean but I like it that way.

Just to point out, I believe that if you still making changes you should reupload it to newgrounds also so it can be seen here and also be the exactly same design as the png (Of course except the transparent background).

GOOD LUCK!

Scifi-Centaur responds:

Thank you for the feed back! It means a lot <3 I'll see if I can fiddle around with the lines and maybe clean it up a little more. It's kinda difficult because I don't have any line smoothing software (I am, unfortunately, a mac user for a few more weeks) but I'll see what I can do. Thank you so much for taking the time to look it over! And good luck to you too!

Would wear it!

That's my favourite design of the three - It's interesting and colorful, and the details and shading are great.
Great work :)

pencilmidget responds:

gosh you're so nice, thanks!! <3

Very cool! I think that line weight and shading could make it even better and add a lot of depth.

Good luck!

Not bad - I'll explain why I gave only 3.5 stars.
The idea is good - I feel like I would like to see an interesting illustration in addition to the text. I really like the handwritten font (I don't know if you did it yourself or used one but it fits well) but I think it should be organized more "eyecatchingly" (Is it a word?) and have some more depth - maybe adding a bit of shadow to the ctrl button, or making the letters bold and "stronger".
In conclusion - It's good, could have some more ambition - Make your creativity burst more and show off more, and have fun!

art-prince-evan responds:

This is really helpful! Thank you for the advice :) (Oh, and the font was done by me!)

"I’ve always wanted to design a shirt, but I never really knew where to start" - congrats, you officially nailed it.

pencilmidget responds:

thank you so much!! ;v; <3

I glad you gave the open category a go!
It's cool - The idea is very creative. I would recommend adding line weight and shading (shading is so awesome, btw).
Keep it up!

"This is my first ever go at digital art" - Still good! Of course you can see some tiny problems in the lines and the overlapping but it's something you learn to avoid and play with only when you keep it up.

Now let's talk about the idea and concept: Awesome!

NatalieAnneWard responds:

Thank you. I may try and have another go to try and get a bit neater.....not sure I'll have enough time but I can always try! :-)

I feel like it's a bit too overwhelming... But actually I don't care it's awesome.

DanielleA responds:

Thank you!! I'm glad you think it's awesome!

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